| 2010-04-04 21:41:09 |
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I think Rob should describe what sex with Ria was like. I'd be interested to know just how snugly him and her fit from his perspective. |
| 2010-06-29 19:40:44 |
The AntiChrist's puppet master.
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It does go downhill about halfway through. You bring in this Damien who is the AntiChrist as you call it. But this little Sierra turns the kid into mush, though the AntiChrist would be at the height of his power during pubescence. Still there is potential to redeem the story. |
| 2010-07-08 20:45:59 |
Mrs Prim
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A little mundane for me but I liked the part about the yellow jackets. Mentioning the kids so briefly might as well have been omitted altogether if they had nothing to do with the story. Just say the kids are these ages and look like this and just leave it up to the reader to imagine the rest. |
| 2010-07-08 20:46:26 |
Mrs Prim
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A little mundane for me but I liked the part about the yellow jackets. Mentioning the kids so briefly might as well have been omitted altogether if they had nothing to do with the story. Just say the kids are these ages and look like this and just leave it up to the reader to imagine the rest. |
| 2011-02-26 21:53:21 |
Let’s Give This a Try Then
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I don't see why the story got 50 percent. It kind of involves bestiality in a different light. Very well done Guardian. |