| 2011-03-04 02:47:09 |
Last Chance....Chapter 2
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It's okay with me. It is nice not to have sex and aggression against women thrown at me in a story. |
| 2011-03-11 00:31:41 |
Last Chance....Chapter 4
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I like it. It is a story. It is the kind of story that could be on a short story website. This is not porn. This is as much a love story as a sex story. I like the characters. I like the counselor. Thanks for telling a story instead of giving me a graphic description of the feelings of a penis as it slides into a vagina which is dripping with wetness. Plenty of that on this website. |
| 2011-03-20 23:21:42 |
The Party_(8)
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Waitaminnit! You started this story with a girl who refers to herself as "I". Then a guy sits on the bed with her and suddenly this story turns third person. You talk about "her" or "she". What happened to "I" or "me"? |
| 2011-04-10 21:18:45 |
Sarah, My Best Friend - Chapter 1
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Keep writing. The story would have been more real for me if Sarah had come round to Matt more slowly. |
| 2012-02-19 02:26:09 |
Kitchen Fun
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My reaction was that I would have liked to punch mommy in the face. |