| 2010-06-03 04:08:37 |
For the Love of an Angel Chapter One
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This felt like the story was a bit to rushed. I understand that many native americans speak in a diffrent manner but the diolauge just felt too stiff and formal for my liking |
| 2010-06-27 04:27:03 |
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Great work. I hope part three is on the way soon |
| 2010-07-27 03:16:54 |
Under The Sea: Sex With a Sea Monster - Pt.1
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work on the grammer a bit more. The story is good and you should keep going |
| 2010-07-31 02:23:21 |
Female Scent - Animal Heat
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ehhhhh... Kinda middle ground for me here. the writing for the scientific parts was well done, but the story parts were lacking. |
| 2010-08-06 02:11:03 |
The Visitor: Part 2
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Its been almost a month, can we get an update? |