| 2010-07-29 00:57:23 |
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I like this one a lot, too. But with a new male character, it became harder to visualize until most of teh way through. But that wasn't something you could control :/ Quite tantalizing, overall. I think my only critique is that once again the sex scene is tooo short for so much buildup. I think you should try for a longer sex scene next time, even if it pushes the boundaries of realism a little, just to see how it comes out. But great job, as usual, Cija. -kisses- |