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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-08-17 14:12:07 | Bobby and Spanky | i used Google translate and Spanish and English being so different the story comes out disjointed and no fun to read only got past the first 10 or so words and could not read any more next time try to put it in English |
| 2012-08-23 13:32:08 | im sorry | what the fuck was that |
| 2012-08-24 13:22:55 | The Ten of Them. Chapter 1 | needs work next time reread the story after you get done writing it and it will help you see and find the mistakes. but don't give up |
| 2013-01-30 12:15:08 | The pony farm | i don't normaly say this..... but learn to write |
| 2013-02-01 03:53:25 | German Shepherd 5_(0) | @ anon 2013-02-01 01:37:19 What is this we got a writing class going on now? If the spelling bugs you that much maybe you should stick to Dick and Jane books |