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Comments from Ashleysaurus
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2010-06-24 05:13:42 | Seregech; Senses Lost | @KingCrazy I'm working on making them longer, and I'm planning on posting more soon To the unknown reader; Your a knob. Obviously there wouldn't be much of a story plot yet. |
2010-07-07 01:59:22 | The Bookworm, the Dog, and Me- Part II | :D I loved this! I wish I was Mikaela ^^, |
2010-07-08 02:30:47 | Teasing Daddy's Friend Until He Can't Take Anymore | Mmm.. great story. ^^, I'm dripping wet. Would have LOVED to be her :D |
2010-08-14 23:13:35 | Hmmmm... I like it, but you could work on the flow a bit more. Other wise, good poem. |
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2010-08-14 23:17:36 | God Of Ra | I thought this was incredibly good, whether it's accurate or not. What are the tales of the egyptian gods and goddesses, if not made up stories? Most can't prove that they were true. For all we know, your poem is accurate, the one to comment before is just ignorant. The flow was perfect, in such an imperfect way. I wish my poems would turn out that nicely, but unfortunately, I am not skilled enough yet I don't think. Keep writing :D |