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Comments from DoodleHead
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-06-25 10:21:41 | Reality Jump - Chapter 1 | Don't worry, last time I counted the next chapter is over 3 pages. And it has a good sex scene! |
| 2010-07-04 13:01:24 | Reality Jump - Chapter 3 | It all get's explained/fixed in Chapter 4, call it a plot device that has been used time and time again to get readers wanting the next part. And I completely agree that handing a loaded gun to someone like that is wrong in every aspect, but again, plot device. |
| 2010-06-29 22:31:28 | Repair Me | Wall of text = Bad!!!!! Try to hit the enter button a couple of times after a paragraph, it helps readers to be able to follow along with the story much better. |