| 2010-07-13 14:56:12 |
Me and my Twin Sister_(0)
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Wow you nimrod you stole one of nivek_88's stories. If you were smart you would of at least change some stuff. Idiot. |
| 2010-07-13 14:58:46 |
a girl and her tentacle monster 11
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C'mon all your readers are waiting for your next story to come out! |
| 2011-01-11 18:56:49 |
A new life begins (Edited and Revised)
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I really enjoyed this beautfiul story of yours and cant wait to see more from you. |
| 2011-01-11 19:19:55 |
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Ok...the idea of this "bug story" is good but after she meets the guy....what? I think you should revise this story. |
| 2011-01-11 19:36:37 |
Willie the dog
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I liked the surprise of the perspective. You got talent and I cant wait to read more if your work. |