| 2013-07-29 12:48:15 |
a bad day to be a cheerleader
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Really quite terrible. Sped through the plot far too quickly, not enough description. |
| 2013-08-22 20:49:23 |
Times in my Life: Part Three
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Amazing story so far. Brings back memories of some of my own teenage fantasies. |
| 2013-08-25 14:23:38 |
my sisters friend liz
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While the story wasn't bad, spelling, the use of quotes to identify when someone's speaking and paragraphs could make it a hell of a lot better. |
| 2014-07-21 22:16:21 |
We've always been close
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Loved it. Do you have a link to the original (I'm hoping there's more parts)? |
| 2013-09-30 19:03:51 |
Me and my Bro Part 2
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Fantastic story, I can't wait for part 3! |