| 2010-09-21 06:27:28 |
My Asian Domination pt. 4: no longer alone
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Good story. Can't wait to read more from you : ) |
| 2010-09-22 06:28:45 |
buck and dixie in middle of winter
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Needs some retouching,paragraphs,I get what your trying to say but its not reading right the way it should. Redo :b |
| 2010-09-22 06:42:46 |
me and auntie with a suprise
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It needs to be rewritten so it comes across as understandable. |
| 2010-09-22 06:57:25 |
Mejere pt.1
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You have got my attention, it was short however and seemed rushed. Looking for more. |
| 2010-09-24 23:50:48 |
Foster care - my new home
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I get the impression she died. I think the story Is a sad, lonely, fucked up way for anyone to grow up feeling they had to trade one abuse for another. No sympathy for these foster abusers. Thanks its fiction. Good story and ideas...good read thanks for sharing your creations. |