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Comments from John P. Dofyle
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-03-26 05:48:43 | My Favorite Niece | Great premise! But I gave up reading halfway through because it was so poorly written! Try again! |
| 2015-04-02 00:01:23 | Grandpa's Milk- Chapter 10 | OOps! Sorry for the editing error. The last paragraph got misplaced- it belongs earlier in the story... :( |
| 2015-04-03 05:04:59 | Grandpa's Milk- Chapter 10 | Look for the tag "anal" if you want anal stories... jus' sayin'... |
| 2015-04-03 05:12:12 | Grandpa's Milk- Chapter 4 | Who said they were underage? I don't mention any ages except Grandpa's! hairlesscock- Thanks for the input. I agree, i'm a little too sparse with the details. I'll try harder (pun intended!). |
| 2015-04-10 04:49:24 | The opening, pt 1 | Excellent descriptive writing! Keep up the good work. (Note: There is a difference between "secret" and "secrete" ) |