| 2013-03-06 16:19:26 |
First time. (Drunk with mom)
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I like the concept you have a lot of different directions you can go with this story line. Keep writing and work on your skills. No matter how well you write someone on here will point out your errors and they are almost always Anonymous |
| 2013-03-08 11:35:04 |
My daughter Annie2
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Another very well done chapter . To bad the idiots have to keep screwing up the comments |
| 2013-03-08 11:55:29 |
My daughter Annie3
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as983, this is one of the finest stories I have read in a very long time . Thanks for sharing it with us and keep up the good work |
| 2013-03-11 09:16:01 |
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Another very well done story PureFiction . Thanks for sharing with us |
| 2013-03-11 14:04:28 |
Aaron's New Stepsister, Part 1 of 3
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Good start , looking forward to yhe rest |