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Comments from tigerlilyNdick
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-10-29 16:15:45 | Like Old Times | Great Start! ~ Getting Really Close To Home. . . |
| 2012-11-09 14:44:52 | A new life - part 3 | Kind Of A Fun Story BUT Very Dificult To Fallow ~ Paragraphs Running Together Like This Make People Tend To Just Give Up & Walk Away. . . . . . . I Did Complete This One BUT Will Not Start Another Chapter Unless There Is Some Structure... Like I Said "Kinda Fun" BUT I Will Not Struggle Through Another Chapter, It's Just Not Worth It! |
| 2012-11-10 04:25:38 | Grandpa & Jackie 4 | Pretty Good Story BUT VERY Dificult To Follow ~ Needs Some Structure. It Helps Me To Write The Story With A Word Processor Like PAGES Or WORD, , , , Even Notepad. Find A Format YOU Like And Stick To It. Check Spelling, Punctuation, Sentence and Paragraph Structure Before Posting The Story |
| 2012-11-27 03:47:44 | A cuckold, in his rightful place | Yeah, A Little Dificult To Read, , , BUT I'm Glad I Stuck With It..... I Like It!!! |
| 2012-11-28 22:13:51 | traci"story | I Guess I'm Just Missing Something Here. . . . . ? |