| 2011-12-18 11:04:12 |
i want to fuck
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Nobody comments much, so I will. Your writing style needs a little work to develope the story, and the spoken words can be placed in " " marks so they read better. Other than that I came as I like the same kind of sex except it is never romantic, just fuck and suck and jack off! More to cum??? |
| 2012-01-07 18:09:08 |
Kenny and Me' Part 3 (Teenage Gay story )
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see my stories for similar fun, and the occasional error...lol |
| 2012-01-27 14:43:56 |
Doug Stories #1
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Extremely well writtine and erotic! It reminded me of my many excursions into the woods as I was young and then as I got older. I have sucked and fucked in the woods many times, and picked up many men for house encounters as well. I have done many over and over again thru the years. I always love the experience! Good job, I look forward to more so keep them, and me cumming! |
| 2012-03-19 14:53:06 |
man i was extemely lucky
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Great story...a little more detail would make it even better, and me even harder. Good descriptions just lacking details such as panty color, things said, details of the shower time, might have made it better and longer. Sure worked for me though! |
| 2012-04-29 08:58:38 |
Locked Out Wearing Panties
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The comment on 4-29-2012 was me, and I guess I had not logged in yet. Jusy wanted you to know who likes your story, and how I love to do the things you described so well! |