| 2010-12-22 00:48:06 |
The front desk girl
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That was great, even heart warming. |
| 2010-12-28 16:21:27 |
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Much easier to read, good job. I'm dying already for chapter three. |
| 2010-12-28 19:37:34 |
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it was a good story that people who can read more than doctor Seuss will follow with ease |
| 2010-12-29 10:17:50 |
Mistaken For A Gentlemen; Part 1
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good start kinda teasing. try to put space between paragraphs. the computer is not like reading a book it exhausts the eyes. but, good start fuck her hard. |
| 2011-01-03 21:35:04 |
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i love all of these stories, you have a very unique and gifted way of writing. |