| 2012-07-02 02:31:12 |
Marjorie 1
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Wow! not long - almost straight into the action, and very 'hardening' action it is too! My fingers are twitching (and that's not all) as I go to Part 2...Great job |
| 2012-07-02 02:39:31 |
Marjorie 2
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Trintyblue is right - and I also knew it would be good! And you have taught me something about writing better, so the next chapter of my current story is going to be shorter and action begins quickly. Thanks for the help, and for the feelings... |
| 2012-07-02 02:53:10 |
Marjorie 3
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I have been wishing for a long time also, but at least your story is so vivid my imagination can run riot - even if not my body - with every dog in the street! |
| 2012-07-02 13:08:20 |
Lupa Love
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I have to agree, Darling, you need paragraphs for easier reading. As an author using Word, I know how difficult it is to post here - the trick is to make double paragraph spaces where you want a paragraph. That will help. Now I will read again and enjoy...thanks! |
| 2012-07-03 13:38:32 |
Everyones favorite "Babysitter"
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As an author of many stories, I have to be very careful of my choice of false names for all my characters, so I don't immediately think you have pirated parts of the story, even though I noticed the error. What I DO know is your story gave me a hardened cock (not an easy thing to do) - so thanks for that!! Steve |