| 2010-12-11 09:10:12 |
Daddy's little Sex Doll
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This could be good but it has lots of typos. It makes it confusing to read. |
| 2010-12-11 22:16:29 |
Life and Times of a Pain Whore - Chap2
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Her life is like a train wreck you can't help but watch. |
| 2010-12-16 17:08:03 |
My Daughter Kelly_(1)
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Good, but please seperate into smaller paragraphs. Otherwise it's a hard read. |
| 2010-12-17 15:15:23 |
Unholy Punishment? Part 1
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That was AWESOME. Please do another. |
| 2010-12-17 19:56:16 |
Insomniac Father
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Liked it till he whipped her across the face with the belt. An ass spanking is hot, a face slap is hot, a belt whipped face not so much. Other wise good job. |