| 2011-03-14 14:37:35 |
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I agree with changing from the dog to black man detracted from the story Please do chapter 11 with the dog back in it. |
| 2011-03-14 14:37:54 |
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I agree with changing from the dog to black man detracted from the story Please do chapter 11 with the dog back in it. |
| 2011-03-23 23:01:43 |
Angel: Destroyed by Dad - parts 1 and 2
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This isn't an erotic story, it's a brutal rape by a brutal father of his daughter. It sounds like he's wanted to do it before but has restrained himself until he sees the dog knotted to her. Write it as you feel it, myself I say bring on the friends, uncles, everyone, the more the merrier. Don't forget their dogs as the men tire of her. |
| 2011-06-04 22:56:01 |
The tree fort chapters 4, 5. 6 & 7
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Let's see, bestiality, blowjob, coercion, oral sex reluctance, young, don't these idiots read codes. What's with all the anonymous comments, too chicken shit to give your name? Personally I liked the story and the rest of his output. If you want to read what you want, and not what is written, then pay the authors for doing the work. |
| 2011-06-08 11:36:37 |
COUSIN'S FARMYARD FUN
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I have the original by Paul, reminded me to re-read it, thanks |