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Comments from Xseverence
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-11-29 11:34:30 | Spin the Bottle_(0) | really good... the characters were so well developed... one of my favorite stories by far |
| 2010-11-29 11:34:35 | Spin the Bottle_(0) | really good... the characters were so well developed... one of my favorite stories by far |
| 2010-12-02 09:39:03 | From a Boy With the Babysitters | thanks for the comments - no i never got a chance to fuck them again but i did get into Kayla's guts about a couple years later - i got a host of more sexual diatribes... all of which are true... and i'll upload them soon |
| 2010-12-09 18:45:45 | Harry Potter - Chapter 1 | wow um... you might what to add some imagination and or emotion into your writing... you fail to paint proper pictures and just coast off what is already assumed by the reader... also you switched narrative perspective a few times |
| 2010-12-09 18:45:54 | Harry Potter - Chapter 1 | wow um... you might what to add some imagination and or emotion into your writing... you fail to paint proper pictures and just coast off what is already assumed by the reader... also you switched narrative perspective a few times |