| 2012-12-05 01:34:42 |
Life's Strange Turns. Part 1
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I enjoyed your ability to capture a male perspective of women and sex. Well written and easy to read grammatically. An interesting story may be to now take the perspective of the 60-year-old woman, and tell her part of the tale. Rushed in a few places and the ending felt abrupt. But a lot of potential in your creative mind. I encourage you to keep writing. |
| 2012-12-05 01:47:32 |
Afternoon Encounter
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If true, couldn't you have taken a moment to help Lisa cover up and collect herself? Well, this story is not my cup of tea generally. |
| 2012-12-05 01:56:16 |
Becoming a single mom
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Very sad and disturbing. |
| 2018-02-17 10:30:36 |
I like to watch boys Masturbate Pt3 The College Years.
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I just found your stories. I hope you find it in you to write more. They made me hard. |
| 2018-02-17 11:35:09 |
Milestone-The Next Day
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Great story |