| 2011-01-23 02:39:26 |
Oh no Please......
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dont listen to peoples criticism they probably just dont like the fact it was a bunch of guys rather than girls... i liked the way it was written, i wouldnt switch from 1st to 3rd so much myself, but it did work kinda.. lol pm me x |
| 2012-11-15 21:32:42 |
I Lust My Sister Meridian
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great story, well written, nice plot and good twists... |
| 2013-05-26 20:14:50 |
Fallen Angel_(2)
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make it longer! I wouldn't have left then, I'd have had her for a week or two until she was completely useless... xD |
| 2014-02-12 04:06:01 |
There's No Just Holly
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that was outstanding. i want holly. |