| 2011-03-08 16:05:04 |
After school incest
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first of all talking about oboma is bullshit on this site hate how people bring shit like that up hear no reson second was great story cant wate for second one and take this advice if someone criticises a story without loging in then they dont have an opinion that matters it was good liked it alot glad to see a sex story with some umpf for the mom son and sister thing hopefully a 3 way will be great :) keep em coming so so so manny posabiletys brush off the haters and completley X out the oboma thing |
| 2011-04-06 21:23:21 |
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for anyones information i went to jail for atempted murder of someone who was varry close to me altho becouse it was a vilent crime and i maneged to get off alittlebit i maneged to stay out of a mental instatuton that i was imprisioned in for quite a while alredy before that for another atempted murder of my father who raped and toucherd me for 13 years of my life and he ended up spending 6 months in the hospitol while i was steaped to a bed for 3 months before getting released another 5 months later and after i was released i originaly started wrighting wich led me to Ka Hamd and now i have vurtualy no time to deal with anybullshit and i onley got on to check the coments |
| 2011-04-06 23:52:36 |
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gramacly speaking it is i got 1/4th of the way thrue not 1/4ths of the way thrue if you are goona say i have terrable gamer i know i do but at least fucking use corect grammer in critisiseing me |
| 2011-04-02 13:13:06 |
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for the person who said that they have read this before they are right altho i did not coppy his work i worked with him he did write it but i told him what to wright if you can read from my other storys that i am not the most gifted in punctuation or grammer and spelling so i actualy asked a moor talented persion in those fields to write what i said he did not stay 100% to what i said but the end result is acceptable as for the ideah it is 100% mine and i take full credit for it my ideahsfor how he acted and everything is mine and how he reacted in certin situations the onley thing is the guy i had typeing did leave stuff out then what i wanted there is actualy much much moor to this story i just wish i had moor time to right and the focus to do it myself i will try and make a sequal and my spelling and everything in this comment alone is why i asked another persion to wright it for me you can see it is not to good |
| 2011-04-05 04:45:29 |
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hey jackass you know who wrote the god damn story if you arnt big enough to admit it im truley sorry for you and the onley regret i have is that i even gave you mine wich wont even happen again and yeah i know you posted it first you fucking prick when i gave you the original about 3 days later i was sent to jail and you fucking knew that and you alredy got my original profile baned from this site and all my storys removed if you want me to take it down i will but it is my story and you fucking know it you god damn mother fucking jackass prick licking bitch |