| 2011-01-07 18:31:52 |
Cheerleader Gets A Shower From The Whole Squad
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hey dude, it was a good story and the spelling was actually pretty good, and before you critic him you should learn how to spell yourself |
| 2011-01-07 18:32:11 |
Cheerleader Gets A Shower From The Whole Squad
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hey dude, it was a good story and the spelling was actually pretty good, and before you critic him you should learn how to spell yourself |
| 2012-01-24 23:56:06 |
My New Punk Neighbor
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Man, you're doing good. I like the stories and i'd love to see a part two on this. Some helpful criticism, small spell check, even if you just give it a once through. But besides that keep it coming. |
| 2012-01-24 23:57:34 |
Taking Over The School Part 1
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Nice, glad to see your back in action. Started out great and grammer is damn good too. Keep it going King us rejects and shejects shall follow. |
| 2012-02-01 19:38:38 |
Abused in school
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Sorry about the question marks. I did not know it didnt allow them |