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Comments from HowardSprague
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2011-01-23 18:22:47 | Excellent start. The dialog is a little stilted. I'll be waiting for the next installment, though. Keep up the good work. | |
2011-01-31 23:15:08 | Love And Lust: Sibling Complications_(1) | It IS a readable story. It just needs proofreading. Missing words and other problems. It's "diluted," not "deluded." Otherwise, this was quite good. |