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Comments from badbabysitter
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2011-03-02 14:46:25 | this was stolen from Lit over a year ago stop stealing people's work |
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| 2011-03-02 14:47:04 | stop stealing peoples work | |
| 2011-03-02 17:11:21 | no , you don't.. i have found MANY of your stories dating back YEARS on different sites by different authors and if you really are such a good author, why is your grasp of grammar so exceptionally weak outside of your stories |
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| 2011-03-02 21:59:02 | Charity Starts At Home: Chapter 1 : Mother-Daughter Reunion | dear jen jen.. that is also bullshit... but if you want to try proving me " wrong" feel free to show me exactly where it is my story allegedly appeared before then.. a link would be nice |
| 2012-11-14 03:42:42 | Heather makes a deal with the dealers | Strong middle, but the run on paragraphs tend to detract from the story.. i feel parts of it were very rushed. My advice is take your time.. you had great dialogue but kept smashing everything else together |