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Comments from BigDoug35
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-02-07 12:11:11 | Taken_(6) | Your structure is sloppy. You need some paragraphs and more story flow. |
| 2011-02-07 12:19:54 | The rape of my sister-in-law | Good dialogue and action. |
| 2011-02-11 21:38:36 | Food court | Nice twist ending. M. Night would be proud. |
| 2011-02-12 11:16:30 | Punctuation is your friend. | |
| 2011-02-12 11:19:43 | More sex detail, but a pretty good story. |