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Comments from mtnguy70
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-03-02 22:47:07 | In the Sandbox - Part II | Keep writing, but work on your spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Your stories are difficult to read with so many errors. Great little series, however. |
| 2011-03-31 13:04:10 | Baseball diamonds are forever... | As with your other story, very well done. Sure, paragraphs are nice, but the lack of them didn't bother me, and although there were some spelling errors, you do do well overall. I'd love to read more about you and Drew, but I certainly understand that you can't conjure up a second chapter, so to speak, when real life doesn't provide for it. I'm sad the two of you didn't sort it all out and become closer, remaining close to this day. Please write more, real or imagined, as you have talent. |
| 2011-04-01 02:24:30 | School boys camping | The small size of the font due to the wider story space made it really hard to read. |
| 2011-04-22 10:42:48 | Thomas and I | Awesome, hardened me right up! |
| 2011-04-24 12:59:41 | Great stories but pretty poor writing. |