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Comments from jsinner93
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-07-08 16:12:24 | Experimentation and Exploration the beginning | It was long, but worth it. I wouldn't have minded the episodes or scenes being done in separate chapters. Stunning read, though |
| 2013-04-07 14:47:14 | Summer_(0) | This is...a weird story. Few spelling errors and paragraphs could be better. Story-wise, though, it doesn't make sense. The first part seems like a cute teen romance, and then it takes a -very- sharp turn at the long last paragraph. No set-up, no foreshadowing, just BAM he's going to town. It feels like the last part is taken from a different story and thrown in there for no real reason. I don't know, just feels like two different stories, that don't really relate to each other at all, except the same character names. |