| 2011-07-03 15:10:01 |
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Why don't you wake your sock up and ask her to vote for you, SWEETHEART. |
| 2011-07-09 06:28:36 |
The Watcher.
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Simple but keeps the reader going to the end. Nice one. BR! |
| 2011-10-02 17:12:30 |
How I met Sam
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Posive vote for a Moorcock man. Good work. |
| 2012-01-22 05:32:02 |
The Mummy_(1)
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Great story. I love your attention to detail in your writings. Keep up the good work and don't worry about the negative votes. They are only here for the sex and can't appreciate a craftsman at work. |
| 2012-02-12 16:27:29 |
Watching My Partner Cheat For The First Time
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I'll give you a plus vote for a good effort but you must reread your story and sort out the grammatical errors. The difference between an adequate story and a great story is often just about holding the reader's attention.and wrong punctuation can lead to boredom while reading. Still, keep up the good work and let's have a really GREAT story next time. |