| 2012-01-20 09:09:42 |
Sweet Dreams Part 1 - Prologue
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I voted "Positive." But in keeping with you request, thougt I would tell you why. First, it isn't just a "Wham Bang Slam" story, it has a real plot. Good sentence structure and good grammar. Realistic, well as relistic as a genie story can be, but the things that happen to a teen couple I can see as having really happened. No rough demeaning scenes, but respectful and sensitive. Take a look at the writer "First Time Wonder" and you will see what I mean. FTW |