| 2015-07-10 17:39:54 |
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This story is absolutely magnificent! Well-written, detailed, with believable, likeable characters, a fascinating plot and lots and lots of hot, hardcore sex! Each sex scene by itself is perfect and yet, reading the story as a whole it's as if each scene tops (pun quite intended) the last in intensity and depravity. You clearly have a gift for writing this kind of porn story, and I look forward to reading many more of your stories in the future. I'd love to see the last line of your story come true: "...and change the world, one cock hungry slut at a time." |