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Comments from sixonine
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2011-10-03 06:13:34 | The Girl Whose Name I Can't be Forced to Remember | interestingly interesting. good flow, ok descriptions, lack of details though. I am a little confounded by what you were trying to accomplish. remember; to write a story just to end it is no fun for the reader. otherwise a good story. |