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Comments from JimmyMcNally
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-04-25 00:28:03 | just a little fun_(1) | Blackmailing sisters never turns out good. first chapter comming along nicely. |
| 2012-04-26 15:02:56 | Natural Born Cocksucker Part 1 | Interesting concept. Good job of relating her thoughts. |
| 2012-04-27 01:27:34 | Cheerleader Full story | Incest, Might in a fiction, but never really wanted to screw my sisters. growing up with them was bad enough. without adding that sort or thing. |
| 2012-05-01 23:06:52 | Shelly was my first Girlfriend. | It is kind of hard to come up with a second part to your first time with a girl. Memory isnt so clear. |
| 2012-05-04 18:49:39 | Dinner At Master L's | Out side of hinting at pedio, the story line is solid. couple of typos spell check didnt catch but I wont diss a good writer for that. Just have to be on the level. those harping that Longer with more detail are full of shit. A good discription leading the readers imagination to fill in the detail is perfection. when you try to fill in every detail the story can drag out. |