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Comments from something_stupid
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-08-07 21:28:08 | A Lily in July | Thanks for the feedback. I'm writing a part 2 now and hope to have it posted soon. |
| 2011-08-08 23:13:06 | A Lily in July (Part 2) | Gotta hate it when you proofread multiple times and don't catch the spelling mistakes (a major one in the last paragraph) until after you submit haha. |
| 2011-08-09 14:40:04 | A Lily in July (Part 2) | Yeah, I'll admit some of it got rushed to try and get the thought down before it and certain sections seem forced and repetitive. If enough people want it, then I'll work on a finale for it and be sure to take my time with it to get it right. |