| 2011-10-16 02:47:56 |
Elle's Revenge 2
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Very good keep going only try more detail in the fuck scenes |
| 2012-06-04 21:12:36 |
My Sisters Sleepover_(4)
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a lot of spelling errors at the end, I need to be longer with a little more detail but over pretty good 7/10 just need to write more a get more practice. |
| 2012-06-15 03:25:33 |
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Oh My Good God! it took me an hour to read these cause I came 3 times |
| 2012-09-06 22:44:46 |
The Wall_(0)
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OMG!!!!! This story is SO touching and sad and happy and such a mix of emotions oh and SO GOOD!!!!! I never thought that I'd find such a good story on this site! This is the first story on here that I don't care that there is no sex in it! You sir HAVE TALENT!!!!!!! |