| 2011-09-25 18:25:30 |
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yes, rachael,,,i liked your story very much,,,very romantic and heart felt,,,so sad you had to lose your lover man,,,keep it up,,you write very well! the erotic descriptions are great!! |
| 2011-09-28 20:30:58 |
A Day on the Dunes
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wow, for a short story you really packed a lot into it!! very good description of events,,,liked it a lot!! very sensual,erotic,,,,felt like i was watching them!! i hope there will be more!! |
| 2017-06-11 02:40:08 |
My Daughter 3
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another great, sexy, loving, erotic chapter, right on, incest should be very loving since it does involve family members, so many of todays writers just do stroke stories with little or no background development of family members. i would think moms dialogue and actions would be very easy to write and evidently you sol ved that problem as there are further chapters here and ready to absorb and make me flushed,hot and hard again. |
| 2011-09-30 23:17:09 |
Strawberry (Chap 3)
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really, really enjoying this little sex tale,,what a fantasy,,,i read a lot of stories,,but this one is off my radar!! got my brain fantasizing like crazy,,,,can't hardly wait for ch 4!! like the way your mind is warped!! |
| 2011-10-02 17:43:40 |
The Twins, Chap 2 (Repost)
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marriage?? well, the story is hot anyhow! |