| 2011-12-17 20:49:30 |
Miranda's First Time
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I have to agree with the last comment completely. I like fantasy to but they do have to be kinda believable. |
| 2011-12-21 18:12:02 |
Peeping Tom 2
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Fantastic, as all your stories are. |
| 2012-02-13 07:31:41 |
A fantasy becoming reality 1
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You can tell it was written in an hour. Why would you post something that you hastily wrote knowing you would get hammered from comments about it. The story could have been good if it wasnt rushed so much. |
| 2012-02-17 17:37:47 |
To bed with my little sisters
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Stop pawning this bullshit as being real. If it is real then your family is some fucked up people and should really seek help. |
| 2012-03-27 06:05:08 |
Megan and I relax. Part 1
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The format sucks and makes it hard to read. Fix it and maybe it might get a positive rating. Should be a little longer also |