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Comments from came2blieve
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-02-11 02:40:36 | THE GIRLS NEXT DOOR_(1) | Good start for a first story. Paragraphs would have made it a bit easier to read. You could work some on describing the feelings that went along with the actions. You better have that Viagra they warn about with the "erection lasting more than four hours" if you are going to do it with all four hotties in the same evening. Mkae it believable, even though its fantasy. |
| 2012-07-21 13:06:28 | The Life Saver | It's a very good story as it stands. No second part needed to complete it. Depression is such a difficult subject to express without experiencing it, but you have written with depth and feeling. |