| 2012-01-04 01:44:31 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 20
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Great story bro. I think it was a little incomplete. I suggest that you compile your story and fatten it up a little. Maybe a project when you get back. I'm looking forward to the finale, even though sad to it ending. By the way I like the ref to the galactica series too. As well as the wheel of time series. Yes I have all of Robert Jordan books too. |
| 2012-01-10 22:48:29 |
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enjoyed it greatly. The best balance of erotica and fantasy I've read in awhile. |
| 2012-01-11 01:34:53 |
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good reading, keep it up |
| 2012-01-12 03:57:57 |
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It was good, but 1 and 2 my opinion was better. But opinions are like assholes. |
| 2012-01-12 04:38:12 |
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Much better than 4, I liked.it very much. Looking forward to the finale. |