| 2012-02-13 21:19:18 |
New Wife, New Neighbors
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Good Read. Next time include the husband. |
| 2012-02-13 21:43:17 |
"The Routine" - Chapter VI
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Great Story hope that's not the end. Keep it going. What else can the Routine be used for ? |
| 2012-02-14 05:55:47 |
Kaylee's hair peeks out
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Good one! Please continue! |
| 2015-05-30 12:57:58 |
Donovan Manor Chapter 4-6
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Dear Anonymous, Be patient, this story is far from being over. The husband is in Japan, what do you think he's doing there after work? |
| 2015-06-08 02:03:11 |
It happened on vacation
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I liked the first story of yours I read. You need paragraphs spaced in there to make reading easier. Just a few spelling errors, which caues the reader to have to re-read that section to figure out what you are trying to say and with few paragraphs that was difficult. You can edit your stories even after you publish them . |