| 2012-01-21 00:08:01 |
Dogsitting
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Hah, I love the people like this genius below me, you see bestiality...you read the story....and then bitch about it....if you dont like it...then dont fucking read it, you suck at life and your so pitiful that it makes me laugh, also you need to work on your spelling genius.....The rest of yall though, thanks for the input, keep it coming |
| 2012-02-19 22:10:18 |
Dogsitting: Day 2
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I'd like to have the 3rd one here soon, just havnt had much time to write it. When I do get it writ out, I promise it'll be worth the wait |
| 2012-02-26 23:06:57 |
Dustin
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As has been said, very good writing, its paints a good picture. I like where its going and the dramatic cliff hanger, looking forward to the next part. |
| 2012-02-28 21:37:15 |
On the Prowl_(0)
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I thought it was good, it was wrote well and gave good detail. The actual act could use a little more filling out though...but over all it was good |
| 2012-03-21 20:19:04 |
Seek The Wolf in Thyself
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I'm working to connect the beginning of the of the story (before the start of this part) onto this piece and then write out a chapter after this piece...tie it all together and give yall a full, revised, story |