| 2012-03-16 20:28:39 |
My Little Buddy, My Lover Chap 4 - Shannon
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I guess I was just too interested in Danielle. I think this was well written but I miss Danielle |
| 2012-03-16 20:43:50 |
My Little Buddy, My Lover Chap 4 - Shannon
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I guess I was just too interested in Danielle. I think this was well written but I miss Danielle |
| 2012-03-18 02:36:38 |
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Greatly written. Think Riley's dark side really made the story. Think there needs to be more (it's 2:30 am I no write to well). Think 3 way gang bang on Lacey would make me cum. I'm also thinking a little less Lacey talking. Her chapter didn't impress except when ken and ry got it on. Always keep Riley in |
| 2012-03-19 14:16:16 |
Catching Emily/Eileen
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Please MORE!!!!! This is fucking amazing. 10 out of 10. Maybe have the guys fuck to. Just suggestions. Keep writing. :) |
| 2012-07-12 02:35:30 |
...And then he kissed me (revised and rewrote)
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Damn people just spam an amazing story up. Predictable but adorable!!! |