| 2014-05-07 05:16:48 |
Taken for a Ride (my revision)
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Damn, didnt notice that. Shit my bad guys, in reference to the Apartment to house thing. |
| 2015-03-23 03:19:13 |
She made my life better
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Only constructive criticism please |
| 2015-03-24 06:34:14 |
She made my life better
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Anon 04:05:57, I didnt only want comments i wanted notes from people on how to make the story better, hence my "Only constructive criticism please" comment. There is no need to be an ass on a website where you cant even log on and be level with me, I appreciate what you said but dont judge me and say im begging for a compliments. You post a story and not as for any type of helpful comments, just a suggestion since you was kind enough to offer me your suggestion :) |
| 2015-07-26 15:26:00 |
Blind Fuck
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This story was really good mate, I enjoyed it thoroughly. I know it isn't my place to say anything but I think you should have went a little more in depth about the anal part, then again I'm nitpicking and the story deserves way more positive votes. Bravo man bravo :) |
| 2016-01-06 19:15:40 |
My Niece, The Kitten
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great story man, bravo :) very few errors, not nitpicking but try and reread it thoroughly next time. sorry i really dont wanna sound rude :X Great story, 100/10 man |