| 2012-10-22 01:17:00 |
Ele: The Rebirth
|
I liked it. It has a interesting story, and this part itself has peaked my intrest. I'm adding this to my favorites, and please continue with this story. |
| 2013-03-12 04:54:45 |
The Fall of Paradise: Chapter 4
|
I liked it. Has a great story to it and a lot of potential to go a long way and become a long amazing story. Keep up the great work. |
| 2013-03-16 04:41:24 |
Bait and Switch Retype - Ch 07-08
|
I dont think DB's story is ruined just...reinvisioned. Every author is different. Also this is tge same story just edited, and so far I like the edits. |