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Comments from pencilpusher
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-03-18 03:05:56 | The Sportscaster in Psycho HELL | Hmmm... Where to begin? Ah! I know. Your writing is horrible. Grammar is basically non existent, characters 1 dimensional at best, your story has details that confuse the reader and it is hard to read for any human who know English well enough to make it out of high school. This could be an okay story but it is way too horrible to read properly. Try next time. |
| 2013-10-04 01:21:45 | Mandy and Daddy | Not bad. Good writing ability. Part 2 maybe a twist? Or some added kink? Idc. Good job |