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Comments from eville_monkey
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-10-06 16:25:24 | Like the other guy said, don't let the occasional moron get to you. As for any normal, intelligent person, we can follow the storyline just fine. The misdirection about the wedding was well written, and I cannot understand how some people don't get it. Anyway, take your time Dizzy, and keep up the good work. | |
| 2020-11-05 08:59:43 | Maria's Favor to a Geek - Chapter 10 | That's a good point alandee. If I write another story, I'll make sure that it has ups and downs, and maybe some twists too. This was the first story that I've ever written all the way to the end. 99% of my writing practice is on unfinished stories. But I've been reading up on story structure recently, and so if I post another story here, it should be a lot better. |