| 2012-10-13 16:01:56 |
he New Pregnant Girl At School part 1
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To be honest: Awful. Read some of the highest-rated stories, and learn something from it. |
| 2012-12-02 17:45:50 |
Christian's hot neighbour
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Spell check, more punctuation, make the paragraphs a little shorter perhaps? |
| 2013-01-12 22:06:10 |
asleep
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You're not as good as you used to be, but maybe it's just me. |
| 2013-01-13 18:56:09 |
My Innocent Addiction: Chapter Four
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That's....awful. I mean, very well written despite the wall of words, but you're quite brutal and cruel. I'd be glad to spell check, punctuate, etcetera, for you, just message me(: |
| 2013-01-25 02:08:45 |
Mine! Part 1: The Bet
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Jesus Christ. Lemme know if ya ever wanna collaborate, you were my inspiration to start writing. |