| 2012-07-10 21:04:16 |
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also its not retarted its RERTARDED. LOL |
| 2012-07-10 21:05:30 |
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damn it I misspelled it too lol I meant to say its not retarted, but RETARDED |
| 2012-07-10 21:17:20 |
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I have over 100 view but no one is letting me know if they like this lol if i dont get some comments back i wont continue the story cause i will assume you dont like it. |
| 2012-07-11 01:04:06 |
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Thanks guys for the critique it will help out on Chapter two which should be on here by tonight. I hope you will enjoy chapter two as well and it will prob be followed by a few more lol. |
| 2012-07-11 01:55:42 |
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Okay guys just wanted to let you know Chapter two is up and ready its just not on the first page go to name and page 37 if you would like to read Chapter two |