| 2013-09-17 19:58:36 |
Tessie Triumphant
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Your story definitely covers a wide range of sexy scenarios and emotions. I like the idea of Tessie and Jim together. I was sorry to read Jim was killed off but the twist in the story was great. A very well written story but I have to agree that double spacing would have been a better read. Looking forward to more of your stories. |
| 2015-09-02 21:47:47 |
My Sister In Law Beth - Conclusion
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Guess I'll add to all the other comments here too. This is one of the best stories I've read. It is such a complete story in every aspect. I looked forward to reading it again whenever I had to stop and come back to it. I really appreciated how you brought everything together; the emotional, the physical as well as the love shared with each other. When I read how he first told Beth's parents I was somewhat ticked as I thought he was going to just come out and tell them. It all worked out the way it was written so it was all good. It was a fantastic story! Having read this story on another site, I'm glad I checked here so I could comment. Thank you for sharing your story. |
| 2013-11-11 16:48:50 |
Bathtime with Daddy~ (Part 1)_(4)
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I gave you a positive rating just for starting your story. It's kinda difficult to tell you how your story is when it's so short. For one thing, don't tease us, your readers. At least get through what happens in the bath before submitting the story. It's not appreciated. Keep writing because it does sound like it can get pretty interesting. |
| 2013-12-31 09:29:19 |
An Attitude Adjustment
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The story was very well written in fine detail. You could definitely feel as if you were shadowing the asshole. Besides the fact he should be shot, you transported the reader into the twisted mind of a villain. Well done. |
| 2014-04-18 21:21:47 |
Beautiful Niece Kaylee Ch.6
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A very good believable story. |