| 2012-08-25 18:37:46 |
Siblings_(9)
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I love the story one of the best I have read but I like a good number of the readers really like Tim. I know you already got rid of him but if this story is the success as i see it being, you might be able to bring him back in part 3 with him sneaking out. Or maybe have a alternate story line that takes the story into a 3 way incest type thing. I know this is your story and whatever happens with be great, so thanks for taking the time to right it. |
| 2012-08-25 22:05:01 |
Detention_(1)
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Great story I love how they can fight and have sex at the same time it turns me on so much and is funny too! Looking forward to the next 7 parts:) |
| 2012-08-25 22:11:00 |
Detention_(1)
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Great story I love how they can fight and have sex at the same time it turns me on so much and is funny too! Looking forward to the next 7 parts:) |
| 2012-08-26 12:27:48 |
Boy+Boy = Ass+Mouth
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Dafaq!?! I hope you wrote this ironically, if so it was great. |
| 2012-08-29 02:29:56 |
Babysitting Chris
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that was amazing! Good story |